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Thread ID: 66110 2006-02-11 09:08:00 How to word an Ad Greven (91) PC World Chat
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429269 2006-02-11 09:08:00 I have been offered some free advertising space in "Invercargill This week" to help me find a job. I would appreciate some help on how to make myself sound impressive in as few words as possible (I don't know how much room is being gifted to me, but I don't think it will be much.)

I don't have much experience, but my marks in the final year of my degree were fairly good. I will be doing a desktop rollout at Fontera starting Monday - do you think I should mention that?

I've got my CV at ftp://greven.serveftp.com if that will help you to help me.
Greven (91)
429270 2006-02-11 09:39:00 Keep it snappy, just enough to interest, no real detail.

Hook - Catch the eye.

Sub - Keep interest, lead in.

Body - A bit of info, purpose.

Finish - ph me, email me, write me.
Murray P (44)
429271 2006-02-11 18:05:00 In your CV, take the "I" out of the list of achievements.
For instance:
received the top year 3 programmer award for 2005

I'd skip the cherries too...
And yes, I'd mention the rollout.
pctek (84)
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