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Thread ID: 143140 2016-11-29 19:51:00 Consonantial Couplets (Mine) SurferJoe46 (51) PC World Chat
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1429320 2016-11-29 19:51:00 There are good poems and then there's some really arcane and childish forms like Iambic Pentameter, Enjambments, Onomatopoeia, etc .


In a poem, a pair of lines that are the same length and usually rhyme and form a complete thought are called a 'couplet'
Those lines that have sounds that are the same are considered 'consonant-like' in that they have single syllabic meter per line .




I thought about this for a long time . Following is an example of a poem that I wrote . espousing the lack of winter's signature here in Montana . There's just 'something missing' on the landscape . Figure it out yerselves!

Hence - be prepared to be amazed at the sheer simplicity and the total mental picture MY poetic form creates in your head .

I give you my newest Uni-Consonantial Couplet:


No
Snow
by: Joseph P Vreeland
SurferJoe46 (51)
1429321 2016-11-29 20:49:00 Bummer
No Summer
Richard (739)
1429322 2016-11-29 21:10:00 For when the animals get ready for winter.....

Full tum
Autumn

By
Kenneth E James
kenj (9738)
1429323 2016-11-29 21:13:00 Tighten sphincter
Here's Winter

(I'm not in the groove
Can anyone improve)

Ken
kenj (9738)
1429324 2016-11-30 03:48:00 There's just 'something missing' on the landscape.

Saw a doco recently about the lake instantly formed in Montana, and the 28 who perished. Apparently it took 100's/1000's? of US army corps to hurry and contain it


Disaster altered the landscape

Then forming a massive shape

Boom! An instant lake

None other than Quake Lake
kahawai chaser (3545)
1429325 2016-11-30 03:57:00 Saw a doco recently about the lake instantly formed in Montana, and the 28 who perished. Apparently it took 100's/1000's? of US army corps to hurry and contain it


Disaster altered the landscape

Then forming a massive shape

Boom! An instant lake

None other than Quake Lake

I'll have to check that out, but surely I'd have seen it in the news at least!
SurferJoe46 (51)
1429326 2016-11-30 08:43:00 As always, there's a Wiki entry...

en.wikipedia.org



Hebgen Dam and creation of the lake
Hebgen Dam, built in 1917, is a concrete core and rock fill faced structure that sustained severe damage but continued to hold. Repairs were completed on the dam spillway in a few weeks. The landslide, which occurred downstream from the dam, blocked almost all the flow of the Madison River which began to fill in the void upstream from the slide. In less than a month, the waters had created what is now known as Quake Lake. The lack of a reliable water outlet for this new lake forced one of the largest mobilizations of the U.S. Army Corps of Engineers ever commenced in the western U.S. Before the new landslide was breached by the quickly rising waters, a spillway was constructed to ensure erosion and potential failure of the natural dam would be minimized.
bevy121 (117)
1429327 2016-11-30 17:27:00 Day-um! I missed that!

That'll teach me to not to miss the morning broadcast on PBS.
SurferJoe46 (51)
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