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Thread ID: 80779	2007-07-05 02:17:00	The *CRITIQUE MY SITE* that youve all been waiting for	Lovelee (6586)	PC World Chat

Post ID	Timestamp	Content	User
565939	2007-07-06 09:17:00	I like it.... Good work. :thumbs:	sam m (517)
565940	2007-07-06 09:43:00	Cheers, when you say "crap" are you really meaning good?No. It's blindingly... painful. And where the heck is the link to the nudists!? :D Having said that, I have to admire the style.	Greg (193)
565941	2007-07-06 11:11:00	Greg .. the link to the nudists is there, you just have to look harder, or are you wanting to see more ;) Mr Lovelee wants to see more of the nudism on the site too. The Flash heading .. you have to look at this two ways .. the website looks good .. its about holidaying, beaches and sun stuff. Women do the holiday bookings, they like to see flashy pictures. The other way is from the male point of view, its not necessary. Get rid of it :xmouth: wmoore ... *New Zealands should be New Zealand's* you really should talk to billy T about that. The text that some dont like, TUFF. :D Thanks sooo much for all the different thoughts. I take none of it to heart, I dont understand some of it hehehe. And I do value your input. Those who've instantly seen the pleasure and beauty of the site Ive added you to my christmas card list. Talking about christmas .. does anyone have any euros to sell? Serious.	Lovelee (6586)
565942	2007-07-06 12:42:00	Greg .. the link to the nudists is there, you just have to look harder, or are you wanting to see more ;) I see it now. And yep, wanting to see the naked women in New Zealand. I'm a perv as much as the nudists are pervs in their own right.	Greg (193)
565943	2007-07-06 21:08:00	Site looks pretty good ( a lot better now :)) :thumbs: As far as the header being to busy, maybe slow it down a bit? Maybe adding a blank line right at the top MAY make the header look less narrow? But all in all, much improved :D	Myth (110)
565944	2007-07-06 21:20:00	:lol: shhhh Greg, dont let the nudists know they are perves, they dont like to even admit it to themselves. Its not just the men u know ;)	Lovelee (6586)
565945	2007-08-30 20:14:00	Now Miss Lovelee...All you have to do is get your own original content for your site...You've copied most of your words from www.aoteaharbour.co.nz ...Its a no no in the internet world and heavily frowned upon by the search engines....You will get penalised by them.	kingcountry (12513)
565946	2007-08-30 20:48:00	Thats very naughty of you Kingcountry . I still have the emails from July in which we discussed cute phrases?? Do you remember them . . Your part from one . . Ok, cool . . . . No worries about using my phrases . . . I'm flattered . . . Alright for a common possum trapper . . :rolleyes: If you have any problems . . ring me!!	Lovelee (6586)
565947	2007-08-30 21:22:00	The flash heading is too busy and does your eyes in after a while . A few other things New Zealands should be New Zealand's Also read your text out loud to see if your sentences flow and make sense . eg: A land & past steeped in rich Maori history Five minutes up the beach is naturist friendly area, if people do come up the beach they usually avoid other people . :confused: Also I think there is too much detail in the home page eg "We take a shovel to dig a hole and wallow for a while . This activity is its best on a summer night, with little or no wind blowing, a full moon, or not, a starry sky, or not . " I like the look of it actually . . . and the clumsy English is kinda cute in a klutzy way . . it rings of aboriginal tongue and might be something a tourist wants if they are going to go bush . :lol: The non-professionalism is cute and creates a kindred feeling . Can bush-speak actually be plagiarized though?	SurferJoe46 (51)
565948	2007-08-30 21:38:00	The site is designed to attract people who are wanting a holiday. That means relaxation from day one! From their contact with us. Which is why the language is in many ways genuine kiwi. :)	Lovelee (6586)
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