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Thread ID: 80725	2007-07-03 06:48:00	Could i have a little bit of constructive criticism please.	Tyroneb (11728)	PC World Chat

Post ID	Timestamp	Content	User
565398	2007-07-06 02:40:00	hey thanks, um just trying to fix one problem - why is it that on some pages there is a big gap? like in ie there is a big gap between the top (where Portrait Photography should be) and where it actually is? Is it to do with my lousy css or what? for some reason it doesn't appear in ff? Any answers Any help would be much appreciated	Tyroneb (11728)
565399	2007-07-06 12:01:00	I think everyone covered pretty much everything but .... is it just me or is this an annoying read ..... A studio set near the Kaimai Ranges, we have a quiet and relaxed shooting location for both studio and outdoor shoots, ensuring an stress-free shoot. We also shoot on location to ensure your needs are met if you have something special in mind. Probably just me but I think you use the work shoot to much. Perhaps I am being too picky. I would prefer something that flows a bit more and really gets punters interested in looking further. Maybe the above could go like this.. "A studio set near the Kaimai Ranges, we have a quiet and relaxed location for both studio and outdoor shots , ensuring a stress free time. We can also shoot on location if you so wish." There you go My 2 cents	wmoore (6009)
565400	2007-07-06 23:58:00	yeah thanks but that dosent solve my problem. How do i fix the big gaps? Thanks	Tyroneb (11728)
565401	2007-07-07 09:20:00	Hey Tyrone, lets get the writing fixed first :) Thats more important than some holes... At a time like this what can you say, sometimes death is a blessing sometime it is so tragic it is unbearable, but memories photographs they are forever. And I truly believe this helps with the grieving and this service honestly comes from the heart. This is real groan material.... How do we count the errors? Really I hope this is not reperesentative of something that people pay for... This berevement text is so bad its funny.... www.en-visage.net.nz En-Visage offers a service where we can put images together of your loved one over there years create a story of there lives.	netchicken (4843)
565402	2007-07-07 09:23:00	I'd probably re word that as well as sorting out the grammar. It appears to be written by someone who has English as their 2nd language rather than their 1st which is not a good sign for a New Zealand designed web site.	winmacguy (3367)
565403	2007-07-08 02:04:00	I'd watch out WMG, the author is Tyrone's mother (apparently) and she claims that she can write: I can write and am able sometimes to put words together when sometime (sic) others can't. Jen may take issue with you for criticising the appalling grammar and composition. :groan: Cheers Billy 8-{) :xmouth: "Putting words together" is no more composition than piling bricks in a heap is building a stately home!	Billy T (70)
565404	2007-07-08 02:17:00	I'd watch out WMG, the author is Tyrone's mother (apparently) and she claims that she can write: Jen may take issue with you for criticising the appalling grammar and composition. :groan: Cheers Billy 8-{) :xmouth: "Putting words together" is no more composition than piling bricks in a heap is building a stately home! Must remember B,the recalcitrant party is not much better than mother. If you can read between the lines.	Cicero (40)
565405	2007-07-08 02:27:00	Tyrone's mother might to have to brush up on her grammar. I can spot 3 errors in the paragraph just from looking at it and that doesn't include using a dictionary. It is very important to have a grammatically correct paragraph that is concise and well written if your wanting to promote a quality product. If the errors aren't pulled up by forum members they will certainly be spotted by eagle eyed members of the public. Just my 2:2cents:	winmacguy (3367)
565406	2007-07-08 04:05:00	. . . you're wanting . . . :groan: Stone . Glass house . :p It's so difficult . ;) You can't proofread your own work . You'll always miss something however careful you are .	Graham L (2)
565407	2007-07-08 04:10:00	. . . you're wanting . . . :groan: Stone . Glass house . :p It's so difficult . ;) You can't proofread your own work . You'll always miss something however careful you are . Too true there Graham, too true . It is also the joys of getting to grips with the complexities of the English language . :rolleyes:	winmacguy (3367)
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