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109626 2002-12-29 08:43:00 There is a preview button to view your post.
I agree with Sam that the language is a put off but other wise a good job.
mikebartnz (21)
109627 2002-12-29 09:15:00 I have taken all this as feedback and have edited my webpage.
Even included a skip intro for the intro.
My New and Improved Webpage (http://www.beef.shorturl.com)
Beef (1415)
109628 2002-12-29 10:16:00 Well done Beef for taking notice instead of offence.
One other thing a photo of a lovely fat hereford instead of a dairy cow would be a lot more appetising.
mikebartnz (21)
109629 2002-12-29 10:26:00 I must say Beef

One of my pet hates is white text on black web site, but in my case dark gray text on black,

I have my browser set to show up script errors (in case my own web site gets errors into it) and your web site showed two errors.

Have you thought of adding sound and have the photo go "Moooooo"
maybe also a "Baaaaaaa " (from the hilly farm next door) why not "Whof whof!!" that's the farm dog,

Sorry keep up the good work,
Buy the way, tell your cousin in add in a few missing photo,
E.ric (351)
109630 2002-12-29 10:33:00 It amazes me how often I have seen yellow on white. Almost impossible to read. mikebartnz (21)
109631 2002-12-29 10:37:00 the only way we come into contact with sheep is on a plate :D

I have got a few moo sounds..How do I get it so that if you move the mouse over the picture it will go mooo..im using Dreamerweaver 4.0

But that cow looks so delicious (I live on Dairy Farm as well).

I might think about the hereford bull

Oh dear, I must link the www.beef.org.nz.
/me off to do updates
Beef (1415)
109632 2002-12-29 10:47:00 Ahahahahaha, omg I Have outdone myself again.

I made a flash movie with that dairy cow and when the mouse rolls over it, it goes moo. Bahahahaahha
/me wipes a tear from eye
Beef (1415)
109633 2002-12-29 11:06:00 Hey that mouseover moo works well in Opera . I actually liked it!

*must be time for sam to get a life*

Thanks for removing the 'you know what' but as another tip it might pay to get the spell check going as well, and maybe a grammar checker . Now I don't want to sound like a school teacher but little things make all the difference . I am not sure who your target audience is going to be but if it is Meat Eaters then the demographic is huge so you'll need to get the spelling right . If it's to semi-illiterate Meat Eaters then leave it as it is, they wont know .

Is there any way to wordwrap the page so I don't have to scroll across the page to see everything?

These are just my opinions, please don't take offence and please don't change anything if it is not what you want . This is YOUR site so design it how you want . Keep up the good work .

sam m
sam m (517)
109634 2002-12-29 11:14:00 it was designed in 1024 768 resolution. And I managed to get rid of that scroll to the right problem. That script error is most likely the yahoo ad's.


I can't see any grammar or spelling errors. And it's just a general public thing eh?
Beef (1415)
109635 2002-12-29 11:59:00 I have had a bit of feedback and have decided to edit out a few, disincouraging words.

'discouraging'

sam m
;)
sam m (517)
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